(soft music plays)

Winny stands next to a big touch screen showing the picture of a table and a logo that reads "Home Work Zone." She is in her mid-twenties, with long straight brown hair. She wears glasses and a blue T-shirt.

She says HI, I'M TEACHER WINNY
AND TODAY ON THE HOMEWORK ZONE
WE'RE GOING TO TALK ABOUT
WRITING A PARAGRAPH SO LET'S GO
TO THE SMART BOARD.
ALRIGHT, WHEN I WRITE A
PARAGRAPH, I LIKE TO USE A
DRAWING OF A TABLE TO HELP ME
THINK ABOUT HOW TO WRITE A GOOD
PARAGRAPH SO I'M GOING TO PUT
THE TABLE UP THERE.
AND WE'RE GOING TO LOOK AT THE
TOP OF THE TABLE AND THAT'S
WHERE WE'RE GOING TO PUT OUR
MAIN IDEA.
THAT'S USUALLY THE TOP SENTENCE
OF OUR PARAGRAPH.
SO WHAT IS THE MAIN IDEA OF YOUR
PARAGRAPH AND THAT'S USUALLY THE
TOP OF THE BOARD.
NOW IF I ASK YOU TO WRITE A
PARAGRAPH ABOUT YOUR DOG YOU
MIGHT, YOUR MAIN IDEA WOULD BE
YOUR DOG.
GOING TO PUT MY DOG, GOOD.

Using a blue marker, she writes the idea mentioned.

She continues AND ONCE WE HAVE THAT THEN WE
NEED SUPPORTING DETAILS TO HELP
SUPPORT US JUST LIKE A TABLE HAS
LEGS WE NEED SUPPORTING DETAILS
TO HELP SUPPORT OUR MAIN IDEA.
SO WE CAN OF EACH LEG AS A
SUPPORTING DETAIL.
SO WITH THE SUPPORTING DETAIL
OF MY DOG WE CAN TALK ABOUT THE
COLOUR OF OUR DOG.
WE CAN TALK ABOUT HOW OLD YOUR
DOG IS, SO THE AGE OF YOUR DOG.
WE CAN TALK ABOUT WHETHER IT'S A
BIG DOG OR A SMALL DOG SO THAT'S
THE SIZE.
AND THEN WE MIGHT WANT TO TALK
ABOUT WHETHER IT CAN DO ANY
TRICKS BECAUSE THAT MIGHT BE
SOMETHING FUN TO ADD IN TO YOUR
PARAGRAPH.

She adds the details expressed and continues SO TRICKS.
AND BY ADDING THESE SUPPORTING
DETAIL IT MAKES YOUR MAIN IDEA
A LITTLE MORE INTERESTING.
SO I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU WHEN
YOU'RE WRITING A PARAGRAPH.
AND I'M TEACHER WINNY, THANK YOU
FOR WATCHING.